Location: Patrick vs Red John

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kat1919
kat1919
Great work
May 12 2009, 9:02 PM EDT | Post edited: May 12 2009, 10:26 PM EDT
awesome work you should be proud! keep up your writing talent. Cant wait for more!
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xoneocean
xoneocean
1. RE: Great work
Sep 24 2009, 2:14 AM EDT | Post edited: Sep 24 2009, 2:14 AM EDT
good...but i expect something more from Jane...he cried..i'm so lovin it..but..i also want to see more actions....i want to see how patrick slowly become Red John...i mean, need to see him turning cold blooded as he's numb from the dull pain of tragic past... Do you find this valuable?    
amk358
amk358
2. RE: Great work
Sep 25 2009, 11:42 AM EDT | Post edited: Sep 25 2009, 11:42 AM EDT
It was interesting, and fairly well writtten. Well done. Do you find this valuable?