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Red Johns Heart
Chapter 1:
Agent Teresa Lisbon walked into her office to find Patrick Jane “sleeping” on her couch
“Jane what are you doing.” she asked
“Oh hi Lisbon you’re here early.” he replied dismissing her previous question
“Jane this isn’t funny,” she said to tired to yell at him “Seriously what do you want.”
“Well I wanted to ask you if you would like to come to my house later on for dinner.”
She was startled at his question
“Don’t worry my dear there will be others there to I’m having a party.”
She loved it when he called her names though she would never admit it
“So you in.”
“Yeah sure why not.”
“Ill see you at my place at seven then”
Just then Van Pelt walked in,
“Oh sorry I didn’t mean to interrupt ill come back later.” she apologized
“No its fine.” Lisbon started to reply but Jane cut her off
“Yes that would be lovely thank you Van Pelt.” Jane said
Van pelt exited the room
“What was that for?” Lisbon asked suspiciously
“I have to talk to you about some thing.”
Mean while …
Van pelt walked back into the office to chat with Rigsby and Cho
“So do you think there is any chance of getting them together?” Cho asked
“Well,” Van Pelt started “Maybe if we could set them up in a life or death situation they might realize their true feelings.”
“Sounds good but how do we do that with out nearly killing either of them.” Cho asked
“I haven’t figured that part out yet.” Van Pelt explained
Back in Lisbon’s office Jane was struggling to tell Lisbon how he felt
“Jane why are you closing all the blinds.” Lisbon asked
“Because I have to talk to you.”
“Ok.”
Jane moved in closer to Lisbon she wasn’t sure what to do and before she could react Jane leant in and kissed her she immediately pulled back and slapped him across the face Jane was startled he stared at her for a few seconds and got up but Lisbon wasn’t having that she pulled him back on the couch and lunged her self at him. They continued kissing as neither wanted to pull away Jane had moved his hands to Lisbon’s waist then up into her hair as he was doing so Lisbon was in the middle of unbuttoning Jane’s shirt.
“Jane we cant be doing this its not right.” she protested as Jane continued to kiss her neck by now the others were wondering what was taking them so long so they sent van pelt to see. Jane was just about to pull off Lisbon’s shirt when van pelt walked in again
“Oh god I’m so sorry as you were.” Van Pelt was terribly embarrassed as was Jane and Lisbon.
“Um I think its safe to say that Jane and Lisbon, well you know, wow that was an interesting sight.” Van Pelt said to the others
Just then Jane and Lisbon came out fully clothed again.
“Uh boss you have our word we won’t say a thing.” Rigsby promised
Chapter 2:
The phone rang Van Pelt picked it up as all the other team members were busy.
“Boss? Hey Rigsby do you know where Lisbon is we got a call and we have to go check it out.” Van Pelt asked
“Uh no sorry I don’t but I imagine her and Jane are having a very awkward conversation right about now.”
“Mmm true ill find her.” Van Pelt said as she went to look for her boss
“Boss” Van Pelt called out but she still got no reply then Lisbon and Jane came out of one of the interview rooms Van Pelt could feel the tension between them.
“Boss we got a call lets go.”
“And where exactly are we going” asked Lisbon
“Its complicated I’ll drive.”
In the car Rigsby sat shot gun and Jane and Lisbon sat in the back Cho followed in a separate car
“So you and Jane huh” he commented
“I prefer not to talk about my private life at work.” Lisbon protested
“Well I don’t see the problem and no Rigsby, Lisbon and I are not an item.” Jane said sadly
“You sound upset about that Jane.” Van Pelt commented
‘Leave it alone guys.” Lisbon said trying to see if Jane really was upset or not.
When the team reached the location of the supposed body there was nothing there but Jane saw it, Red Johns smiley face but where was the body
“Lisbon.” Jane yelled
“Yeah, oh damn not again, ok lets not jump to conclusions.”
“It’s him I no it. He was here.”
Jane and Lisbon went over to look for the body as the got closer they saw her she was a young woman early twenties curly brown hair about 5 ft 6 and appeared to have been going out some place.
“Look Lisbon look at her toenails.” Jane said as he grabbed her hand clearly he was very upset
“Ok so were calling it a Red John case.” Lisbon explained.
“Jane you have to understand how much I need you the whole unit needs you but you’re still in love with your wife its obvious by the way that you react to Red John, you still love her.”
“Ill always love her but she’s dead and nothing I do will change that I can’t bring dead people back to life can I so I might as well help save as many as I can right and plus when we catch Red John which I know we will I’ll need a reason to stay.”
“Jane what if I don’t want to be that reason.” she asked
“I think you do.”
He leant down to kiss her, she couldn’t be bothered stopping him instead she kissed him back ten times harder which only encouraged him to keep going but she could resist when he ran his hands over her hips and though her hair, she found her self running her fingers though his beautiful golden locks of hair unable to pull away from the kiss.
“Umm boss?” Cho interrupted
But Jane continued to kiss Lisbon’s neck and run his hands over her waist and back she pushed away to answer Cho
“Yeah.” she replied
“Never mind.” Rigsby said as he pulled Cho away from Jane and Lisbon
Chapter 3:
“Hey has any one seen Lisbon.” Jane asked sounding very worried
“No actually I haven’t for a while” Van Pelt remarked
“Me either.” said Cho and Rigsby
“JINX.” yelled Rigsby “You owe me a soda.”
“Guys ill buy you both a soda if you can tell me were Lisbon is.”
“You really love her don’t you?” Van Pelt asked
“Yes I do ok now where is she.” Jane said getting very frustrated.
The office phone rang and Jane ran to pick it up
“Lisbon?” he asked
“ Yeah she’s here but she wont be for much longer.”
“JANE, JANE?” Lisbon shouted
“Lisbon is you alright.” Jane asked nearly in hysterics
“I love you.”
“I love you too I’m going to get you out of there.”
“Jane don’t be stupid it’s a trap you know that.” she explained trying to keep calm
“How touching I almost want to cry look you have one hour before I destroy everything you’ve ever cared about.” he laughed and hung up
“What was that about.” asked Rigsby
“Red John has Lisbon and he is holding her some where that has things that I care about in it and he is planning to kill Lisbon and blow some thing up I’m just not sure, oh I know, come on we have to hurry.
Chapter 4:
Jane and the rest of the unit hurried out to the car Jane jumped in the driver’s seat and raced off to the grave yard to find his wife and Childs small tomb.
“Wow your wife and child are buried in there how we get in.” asked Cho
“I have the key.”
“But we have to wait for the bomb squad first.”
“Screw the bomb squad I’m going in to get her don’t try and stop me.”
Jane race in side and saw Lisbon unconscious and blind folded and Red John long gone.
“Lisbon darling wake up.” Jane whispered in her ear
Jane picked her up and carried her out the door he noticed all her clothes had been torn and that there was blood every where
“Is she ok.” Cho asked
“Bomb squads nearly here.” Rigsby informed the others
“It’s too late for that she’s going to blow any minuet now.”
BOOM Jane threw himself over Lisbon to protect her the bomb wasn’t very big but Jane and Lisbon still got thrown 10ft from where they were. Jane look back at the remains of his wife and child and a single tear ran down his cheek. Lisbon had landed on top of Jane and she leant down to kiss him he didn’t protest just kissed her back, Jane felt a sort of liquid run over his hand he pulled out of the kiss much to Lisbon surprise.
“My god Lisbon you’re bleeding.” Jane remarked
“It’s just a little cut I’m fine.”
“No you’re not come on let me have a look.” Jane asked
Lisbon reluctantly rolled off of Jane how she wished she could have stayed there in his arms all day and stare at his beautiful golden hair and watch as his blue eyes shone in the sunlight. It was getting late and the sun had just started to set. Jane noticed he had blood on his chest Lisbon showed him her cuts
“Oh god please no.” Jane cried
“What is it.” Lisbon asked as she looked down at her chest she too saw the Red john smiley face scratched onto her chest just above her heart
Agent Teresa Lisbon walked into her office to find Patrick Jane “sleeping” on her couch
“Jane what are you doing.” she asked
“Oh hi Lisbon you’re here early.” he replied dismissing her previous question
“Jane this isn’t funny,” she said to tired to yell at him “Seriously what do you want.”
“Well I wanted to ask you if you would like to come to my house later on for dinner.”
She was startled at his question
“Don’t worry my dear there will be others there to I’m having a party.”
She loved it when he called her names though she would never admit it
“So you in.”
“Yeah sure why not.”
“Ill see you at my place at seven then”
Just then Van Pelt walked in,
“Oh sorry I didn’t mean to interrupt ill come back later.” she apologized
“No its fine.” Lisbon started to reply but Jane cut her off
“Yes that would be lovely thank you Van Pelt.” Jane said
Van pelt exited the room
“What was that for?” Lisbon asked suspiciously
“I have to talk to you about some thing.”
Mean while …
Van pelt walked back into the office to chat with Rigsby and Cho
“So do you think there is any chance of getting them together?” Cho asked
“Well,” Van Pelt started “Maybe if we could set them up in a life or death situation they might realize their true feelings.”
“Sounds good but how do we do that with out nearly killing either of them.” Cho asked
“I haven’t figured that part out yet.” Van Pelt explained
Back in Lisbon’s office Jane was struggling to tell Lisbon how he felt
“Jane why are you closing all the blinds.” Lisbon asked
“Because I have to talk to you.”
“Ok.”
Jane moved in closer to Lisbon she wasn’t sure what to do and before she could react Jane leant in and kissed her she immediately pulled back and slapped him across the face Jane was startled he stared at her for a few seconds and got up but Lisbon wasn’t having that she pulled him back on the couch and lunged her self at him. They continued kissing as neither wanted to pull away Jane had moved his hands to Lisbon’s waist then up into her hair as he was doing so Lisbon was in the middle of unbuttoning Jane’s shirt.
“Jane we cant be doing this its not right.” she protested as Jane continued to kiss her neck by now the others were wondering what was taking them so long so they sent van pelt to see. Jane was just about to pull off Lisbon’s shirt when van pelt walked in again
“Oh god I’m so sorry as you were.” Van Pelt was terribly embarrassed as was Jane and Lisbon.
“Um I think its safe to say that Jane and Lisbon, well you know, wow that was an interesting sight.” Van Pelt said to the others
Just then Jane and Lisbon came out fully clothed again.
“Uh boss you have our word we won’t say a thing.” Rigsby promised
Chapter 2:
The phone rang Van Pelt picked it up as all the other team members were busy.
“Boss? Hey Rigsby do you know where Lisbon is we got a call and we have to go check it out.” Van Pelt asked
“Uh no sorry I don’t but I imagine her and Jane are having a very awkward conversation right about now.”
“Mmm true ill find her.” Van Pelt said as she went to look for her boss
“Boss” Van Pelt called out but she still got no reply then Lisbon and Jane came out of one of the interview rooms Van Pelt could feel the tension between them.
“Boss we got a call lets go.”
“And where exactly are we going” asked Lisbon
“Its complicated I’ll drive.”
In the car Rigsby sat shot gun and Jane and Lisbon sat in the back Cho followed in a separate car
“So you and Jane huh” he commented
“I prefer not to talk about my private life at work.” Lisbon protested
“Well I don’t see the problem and no Rigsby, Lisbon and I are not an item.” Jane said sadly
“You sound upset about that Jane.” Van Pelt commented
‘Leave it alone guys.” Lisbon said trying to see if Jane really was upset or not.
When the team reached the location of the supposed body there was nothing there but Jane saw it, Red Johns smiley face but where was the body
“Lisbon.” Jane yelled
“Yeah, oh damn not again, ok lets not jump to conclusions.”
“It’s him I no it. He was here.”
Jane and Lisbon went over to look for the body as the got closer they saw her she was a young woman early twenties curly brown hair about 5 ft 6 and appeared to have been going out some place.
“Look Lisbon look at her toenails.” Jane said as he grabbed her hand clearly he was very upset
“Ok so were calling it a Red John case.” Lisbon explained.
“Jane you have to understand how much I need you the whole unit needs you but you’re still in love with your wife its obvious by the way that you react to Red John, you still love her.”
“Ill always love her but she’s dead and nothing I do will change that I can’t bring dead people back to life can I so I might as well help save as many as I can right and plus when we catch Red John which I know we will I’ll need a reason to stay.”
“Jane what if I don’t want to be that reason.” she asked
“I think you do.”
He leant down to kiss her, she couldn’t be bothered stopping him instead she kissed him back ten times harder which only encouraged him to keep going but she could resist when he ran his hands over her hips and though her hair, she found her self running her fingers though his beautiful golden locks of hair unable to pull away from the kiss.
“Umm boss?” Cho interrupted
But Jane continued to kiss Lisbon’s neck and run his hands over her waist and back she pushed away to answer Cho
“Yeah.” she replied
“Never mind.” Rigsby said as he pulled Cho away from Jane and Lisbon
Chapter 3:
“Hey has any one seen Lisbon.” Jane asked sounding very worried
“No actually I haven’t for a while” Van Pelt remarked
“Me either.” said Cho and Rigsby
“JINX.” yelled Rigsby “You owe me a soda.”
“Guys ill buy you both a soda if you can tell me were Lisbon is.”
“You really love her don’t you?” Van Pelt asked
“Yes I do ok now where is she.” Jane said getting very frustrated.
The office phone rang and Jane ran to pick it up
“Lisbon?” he asked
“ Yeah she’s here but she wont be for much longer.”
“JANE, JANE?” Lisbon shouted
“Lisbon is you alright.” Jane asked nearly in hysterics
“I love you.”
“I love you too I’m going to get you out of there.”
“Jane don’t be stupid it’s a trap you know that.” she explained trying to keep calm
“How touching I almost want to cry look you have one hour before I destroy everything you’ve ever cared about.” he laughed and hung up
“What was that about.” asked Rigsby
“Red John has Lisbon and he is holding her some where that has things that I care about in it and he is planning to kill Lisbon and blow some thing up I’m just not sure, oh I know, come on we have to hurry.
Chapter 4:
Jane and the rest of the unit hurried out to the car Jane jumped in the driver’s seat and raced off to the grave yard to find his wife and Childs small tomb.
“Wow your wife and child are buried in there how we get in.” asked Cho
“I have the key.”
“But we have to wait for the bomb squad first.”
“Screw the bomb squad I’m going in to get her don’t try and stop me.”
Jane race in side and saw Lisbon unconscious and blind folded and Red John long gone.
“Lisbon darling wake up.” Jane whispered in her ear
Jane picked her up and carried her out the door he noticed all her clothes had been torn and that there was blood every where
“Is she ok.” Cho asked
“Bomb squads nearly here.” Rigsby informed the others
“It’s too late for that she’s going to blow any minuet now.”
BOOM Jane threw himself over Lisbon to protect her the bomb wasn’t very big but Jane and Lisbon still got thrown 10ft from where they were. Jane look back at the remains of his wife and child and a single tear ran down his cheek. Lisbon had landed on top of Jane and she leant down to kiss him he didn’t protest just kissed her back, Jane felt a sort of liquid run over his hand he pulled out of the kiss much to Lisbon surprise.
“My god Lisbon you’re bleeding.” Jane remarked
“It’s just a little cut I’m fine.”
“No you’re not come on let me have a look.” Jane asked
Lisbon reluctantly rolled off of Jane how she wished she could have stayed there in his arms all day and stare at his beautiful golden hair and watch as his blue eyes shone in the sunlight. It was getting late and the sun had just started to set. Jane noticed he had blood on his chest Lisbon showed him her cuts
“Oh god please no.” Jane cried
“What is it.” Lisbon asked as she looked down at her chest she too saw the Red john smiley face scratched onto her chest just above her heart
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oh wow, I hope you write more soon, I'm already wanting more!!! :0) How do you start writing stories on this? I'm having a lot of fun writing in the Jisbon episode so I thought I might give it whirl, Where do I begin?? :0)
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Wow, epicness.
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thanks promise ill write another epic one but different kind of epixc would do it now but im suposed to be doing home work
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