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Jun 10 2011, 7:14 PM EDT by
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Thread started: Sep 3 2009, 11:43 AM EDT
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please comment!
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OH MY GOD
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Jun 10 2011, 6:59 PM EDT by
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Thread started: Mar 30 2009, 8:52 PM EDT
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I was literaly in tears by the end. This was a very sweet and sad story.
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RE: OH MY GOD
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Jun 10 2011, 6:59 PM EDT
great! i didn't get it at first but when i finished, i got it & it was brilliant.. well done!
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Good!
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Jul 29 2010, 12:06 PM EDT by
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Thread started: May 15 2009, 5:19 AM EDT
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That's pretty good! Icekit113 is right the Patrick in your story is just like the "real" one. I'm really looking forward to see how it goes on... I'm trying to write a Mentalist story myself in German and I find it pretty hard. It's not easy...you must know. ;-) Just go on writing really good wirk ;-)
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RE: Good!
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Jul 29 2010, 12:06 PM EDT
You do capture jane's personality really well. The only mistake I could find was that I don't think jane drinks coffee but other than that it was awesome :D
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Review/comment on this story.
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Feb 7 2010, 12:48 PM EST by
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Wow darydoo, you asked me to check out your story and I have to say Im impressed! Very interesting idea and was wondering are you on fanfiction.net? If you arent I highly recommend you too, its great!!!
You should really continue to write, your great at it and you obviously have alot of talent so use it as much as you can :D
Lynne xx
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OMG!!!
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Jan 3 2010, 5:08 PM EST by
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Thread started: Sep 26 2009, 6:05 PM EDT
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That was my second time reading this. That was one of the best fanfiction pieces i have ever read in my whole life, hands down. You are completely amazing, and i totaly like imagined all of it my head. Even though it was all out of character big time, it was awsome. I love the ending and the kissing part. I had Lost my breath. I wish that would be like a show or episode but ya. You have a true talent and im stunned. On a scale from 1-10 that was an 100. Great Job.
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RE: OMG!!!
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Jan 3 2010, 5:08 PM EST
Oh my gosh, I'm *SO SORRY* that I didn't respond to this! I had no idea you'd even written it... arguhhh!
As for your comment: OMM (oh my Mentalist), thank you SO much! I'm glad you liked it. Yes, I know it was OOC, but I love that kind of stuff. :))) Thank you, this is like, the best review I've ever gotten! Again, thanks a lot! Ahh, dang, this is making me blush.
This *should* be an episode. Lol. I wish.
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Very good!
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Oct 28 2009, 6:23 PM EDT by
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Thread started: Sep 2 2009, 3:59 PM EDT
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Yes there are a lot of errors (but I'm an English teacher!!) and Patrick Jane (Simon Baker) has green eyes by the way. He also has insomnia, not sleep amnesia. I do like your description of the characters and setting though and you have captured Patrick's wit. Cho has a dry sense of humour and that's difficult to get to grips with! All in all, I enjoyed this very much.
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RE: Very good!
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Oct 28 2009, 6:23 PM EDT
That sounds great! I will unlock the page for a couple of weeks. :-) Starting today Oct 28-Nov 15. I appreciate the help so much!
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Great
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Sep 25 2009, 11:42 AM EDT by
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awesome work you should be proud! keep up your writing talent. Cant wait for more!
kat
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RE: Great work
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Sep 25 2009, 11:42 AM EDT
It was interesting, and fairly well writtten. Well done.
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great!
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Aug 31 2009, 5:59 PM EDT by
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love it! the only suggestion i have is make sure you check it over lol, some spelling mistakes, but seriously wow you have a great career ahead of you, really really good!
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i love it
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Aug 29 2009, 6:17 PM EDT by
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i sugguestion you should be writer and pubish a book for teens or adults using the similar storyline
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Teehee
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Jul 26 2009, 1:44 PM EDT by
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very cool, write more!
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the story
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Jul 24 2009, 12:11 PM EDT by
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i love that story! its just like jane
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Maroon Devil Story I Wrote
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Jul 8 2009, 9:14 PM EDT by
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I just wrote a Mentalist Fan Fiction. It is on this site in the Fan Fiction area, and I would love it if you told me what you think of it. :-) It is called Maroon Devil and it took me a while to write it. Please comment and tell me honesty what you think.
Kat1919
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RE: Maroon Devil Story I Wrote
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Jul 8 2009, 9:14 PM EDT
WOOOT WOOOT very cool, doesn't over "do" anyone. Cho fits this story very well :D. haha its good to get a little bit more of Cho, he doesn't get the love and attention that he diserves lol! Fantastic JOB! I wish i had free time like that XXXD love ya
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New Mentalist Forum and Fanfic Awards!
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Jun 30 2009, 6:51 AM EDT by
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Hey guys,
So I just opened up a new Mentalist forum with a slight emphasis on Jello... If you don't know what that is, follow the link! ;)
www.jello-forever.proboards.com
I'm also appealing to all Mentalist fanfic writers and readers. I'm holding the 1st Annual Jello Awards honouring the authors of the fandom. Go to the forum and find out how to nominate! There will be prizes!!!!
Thanks!!!
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Where my OC's at??
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Jun 26 2009, 4:37 PM EDT by
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Where are there any OC (other character) fanfction stories? Preferably Patrick/OC/
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Jun 26 2009, 4:37 PM EDT
Oooh, you should! I love reading/writing fanfiction and I'd totally read yours!
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where is the button to add ur own fan fiction
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Jun 19 2009, 6:10 PM EDT by
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where is the button to add ur own fan fiction
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Jun 19 2009, 6:10 PM EDT
Okay, what you do is you click on add a new page at the bottom of the location screen box thingy at the side, you know, the one where you scroll to find different pages. Then, you give your page a title, and then click move location. Scroll down and find the Fanfiction section, then add your fanfic! If you're still confused, please tell me.
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FUNNY
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May 4 2009, 12:24 PM EDT by
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This is really funny and good...I love how ya made Patrick...its totally him
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no no
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Apr 7 2009, 6:47 PM EDT by
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boooooooooooooooooooooooooo
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Apr 7 2009, 6:47 PM EDT
No, thank heaven. Usually everyone is laid back & cool-but newbie seems to be a drama queen. I feel sorry for the winner-being called a thief- One moderator is a local school therapist-they get sued a lot-I keep saying this place is rough-and it's upsetting her enough that she called my house yesterday about libel laws. So far newbie has called 3 moderators names.
I'm a moderator on several sites & that one can attract a weirdo off & on. This one is the most fun-chat about hotties-fun plots-make up games & do something once every few years.
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GREAT STORY!!
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Mar 27 2009, 9:14 PM EDT by
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MORE! MORE!
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Beginnings and ends
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Mar 19 2009, 9:04 PM EDT by
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GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love it!
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Fanfiction
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Mar 5 2009, 7:25 PM EST by
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Thread started: Mar 4 2009, 11:39 PM EST
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If you love stories about some of your favorite TV shows please check out Fantiction.com. I love this website! Has lots of great stories about many great shows and of course The Mentalist is one of them.
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RE: Fanfiction
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Mar 5 2009, 7:25 PM EST
Yeah, I red the one by Snowcherry something. It was REALLY good!
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